



She also said at one point that she was falling in love with him, and this was sometime in the middle of the novel and I was like.uh what? Doesn't she already love him by this point? I was confused to say the least.Īlso a minor thing but Ben and Abbey said they saw a Japanese restaurant/bait shop but then later it was a Chinese/bait shop. At one point, Caspian did something 'totally swoon-worthy' and Abbey said to herself 'that was totally romantic.and kind of creepy.' Well, which one is it? Is he lovely and romantic or is he a creepy ghost? Either she loves him with all her heart like she claims at some points or she doesn't.

The characters can’t have what they want, which normally would be sexy, but all evidence points to the fact that he CAN pick up objects and change his clothes and draw and stuff so why wouldn’t he be able to touch her? I think the author should have stuck with him either being able to do it all, touch everything/everyone, or be unable to do anything.Īnd Abbey completely threw me off. He changes his clothes? So because his clothes are physical things that Abbey and everyone can see, do his clothes just float in the air? They must, because when Caspian goes to grab Abbey a snack when they are at the hotel together, she says it might look suspicious if ‘food is floating in the air.’ So when he walks around with her do people see floating clothes?Īlso, Caspian can pick up objects but he can’t touch Abbey? That seems kind of stupid…the author just did that so there would be sexual tension between them. I didn't really get Caspian in this book. (Her perfume making wasn't really as important or written about in this story, weirdly enough given the cover art.) I did a lot of skim-reading because the main character isn't interesting enough to me for me to read the 200+ pages about her day to day life. Again, this novel was okay.I said in my last review for The Hollow that I probably wasn't going to read the rest of this series but I forgot that I already put the next book on hold so when it came in I thought I should give it another chance.Īgain it just felt kind of 'blah' to me, just like the first one.
